helloutcry's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cooking Hostile! Ep 1]

the graphics are awesome, improve timing and animation. nice lines, i cant do that.

JoeySiler responds:

Thanks for the feedback. After about 6 months of learning Animation,this was my 3rd animation and i agree it could have used a lot more polish. You can compare it to Episode 4 and hopefully see an improvement. Thanks for watching!

J

[DBSQ Short 2]

The animation and the drawing was ok. Try to put more of a catchy intro and title credit and stuff like that, or add more SFX or something.

Moffett1990 responds:

Yeah it's just a short, nothing special I'm not a real animator nor do I have the experience to do anything special with animation. I have a team working on actual animating this series. This was just for fun.. A learning experience

[The Tragic Trilogy]

I like how you made it look like those 70's comic book. although there are some spot where it looks kinda crude, but its very good.

Merol responds:

Thank you! And yeah, it does look crude in a lot of spots, also i feel like the style was kind of inconsistent among the movies :/

[Mr. Boom Boom]

lol dude. i get critics all the time saying shit that i already know too. but, yah it sucks, bcos im like, "what the fuck is this shit?". but it doesnt suck bcos of the fact that it sucks, you have the skills in graphics and animation and stuff like that.

Deadtuna responds:

Thanks :D

[A Gift]

smooth animation.

JaredGagnonArt responds:

Thanks!

[Hugger]

the way you arrange the scenes was pretty good, and that made it kinda interesting to watch. only the animation, it might improve. but i understand that, the crudeness put an additional comedic effect on it. but still, you should improve the animation, even just a little bit. I'm hoping to see this cartoon of yours evolve in the future episodes. that would be cool.

canuckboy responds:

Thanks for the advice helloutcry and the constructive criticism. I made this cartoon a while ago and didn't get to finish it the way I wanted (convert it to avi) as my computer died , I wanted more audio and a little more animation but it is the first of many episodes that I have for Hugger. I didn't realize it was a judging process to have a cartoon published so I hope people take to hugger and look forward to more episodes.

[sign language]

haha, the other guy sound like that goth kid from south park

tylerghardin responds:

the snotty teen chick, per se?